记得这世界上第一次说我能写散文的人,是我做医学生实习时遇到的一位医生,不过那可不是表扬,而是一个义正词严的批评。我写了一页某胆囊炎病人的病历,请他指教——这是医学生必需经过的门槛,如果你连病历都写不好,你就没法毕业。他是一位资深的外科主任,在同学所写的病历上,批得繁花似锦,但我的病历完璧归赵,滴墨未染。我心忐忑,自问不曾优秀到这般地步,病历已浑然天成吧?果然,隔着荒原一般辽阔的办公桌他对我说,你的文笔不错,不过,这不像是一页病历,而像一篇散文。我小声回嘴道,能说具体点吗?他说,可以的。我正想说得详细。比如,你多次描写胆绞痛发作的症状,每次都不同,写得很精彩,但作为医学文件,在一次典型的描写之后,只需写"此后发作频繁,约××时间一次,部位同前,疼痛性质相仿,服某类药物后缓解"即可......,
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